Wednesday, 22 April 2015

“Who cares, man” -> “man, cares who”
Now you know -> know you now
Want to hear -> hear to want

It does matter,
Some do care
“Man, cares who,” you say,
Yet still want to hear
But actually in reality,
You just hear to want
I know you now,
My sneaky ingenuity

5 comments:

  1. The last one seems like a fraction from a sentence... But other than that, good craftmanship and I like the theme and message.

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  2. I think the mood is kind of sneaky and decieving, which I really like.

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  3. So deep I can see Adele rolling ;D

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