Writing game 4:
He was dead
–> dead was he
This was the last time I saw John -> John saw I time last the was this
I will miss you -> you miss will I
This was the last time I saw John -> John saw I time last the was this
I will miss you -> you miss will I
Dead was he
so he didn´t saw me
when I came to visit him
so he didn´t saw me
when I came to visit him
For one last time together with Tim
John saw I time last the was this, it was sad
But I won´t go home and cry and be mad
You miss will I
See you one time in the sky
Death, sorrow and misery - a useful topic for poetry!
ReplyDeleteVery deep. I like the composition.
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